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【忆旧游】【定格】 娉婷
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PostPosted: 2010-07-05 19:03:46    Post subject: 【忆旧游】【定格】 娉婷 Reply with quote

【忆旧游】【定格】 娉婷


渐洪波暗涌,烁烁金鳞,红日初升。
渺渺征帆小,喜鸥翻浪际,碧雪飞鲸
赤霞映暧云霭,扑面海风迎。
忘碌碌諠寰,蝇营狗苟,顿觉神清。

难明,者尘世,竟几个人知,何物为情?
但识君恩重,纵胭脂红粉,谁恋娉婷。
漠然近在咫尺,千百里芳馨。
似梦绕魂牵,佳缘得伴余此生。



【忆旧游】

《清真集》入“越调”。一百零二字,前片四平韵,后片五平韵。过片二字亦可不叶。
【注】此调有六领格字,并宜用去声。亦有开端不用领格字,改上一、下四句法为上二、下三,改二、三句为八言一句,过片二字减去一韵者。有前片第四句改五言为上三、下四的七言句式“│││、--││”,而将第五句的领格字减去,又于过片五字改作“!--││”的上一、下四句式,并于结尾倒数第二句增叶一韵者。

【定格】

仄平平仄仄,仄仄平平,平仄平平(韵)。
仄仄平平仄,仄平平仄仄,仄仄平平(韵)。
仄平仄仄平仄,平仄仄平平(韵)。
仄仄仄平平,平平仄仄,仄仄平平(韵)。

平平(韵),仄平仄,仄仄仄平平,平仄平平(韵)。
仄仄平平仄,仄平平平仄,平仄平平(韵)。
仄平仄仄平仄,平仄仄平平(韵)。
仄仄仄平平,平平仄仄平仄平(韵)。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-06 05:15:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

情景交融,写景抒情描绘独到!欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-07-06 08:24:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊君好评!
问候先生!
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