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鸭蛋山码头

晴天雨天
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Posted: 2010-06-16 16:26:53 Post subject: 鸭蛋山码头

鸭蛋山码头我已经下船，渡轮目送我没有离开。今年鸭蛋山码头是最冷清的端午节跨海大桥在旁，也许我是最后几个怀旧的漂客我是想留步，想留下一些安慰还是走了。也许以后我再来时鸭蛋山长满了艾草端午节在舟山群岛过节，那里变化真大！问好节日里的朋友！ _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-06-16 19:06:09 Post subject:

问好鸭蛋山，问好码头 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-06-16 20:11:15 Post subject:

鸭蛋山如屈大夫一样被记住。我们会记得鸭蛋山码头曾经的繁忙，曾经的贡献！ _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-06-16 20:53:12 Post subject:

舟山群岛该是个好地方 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-06-17 03:46:53 Post subject:

舟山——跨海大桥我学会了飞翔，在大海，在彩云之上我的眼睛是波涛，是一艘艘帆船还有珍珠般的海岛我学会了飞翔，不必挥动翅膀，这时大海的大，天空的高一只水鸟飞过，身旁我终于说出了惊讶在我回到陆地，回头看到身后跟来一串一串彩球跨海大桥是我舟山之行最大的惊讶。 _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-06-17 04:37:28 Post subject:

我终于说出了惊讶我学会了飞翔，在大海，在彩云之上我的眼睛是波涛，是一艘艘帆船还有珍珠般的海岛我学会了飞翔，不必挥动翅膀，这时大海的大，天空的高一只水鸟飞过，身旁我终于说出了惊讶在我回到陆地，回头看到身后跟来一串一串彩球这首更好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2010-06-17 06:21:14 Post subject:

谢谢韩老师来读！ _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-06-17 16:28:09 Post subject:

沈家门不可能没有海鲜我用多少双眼睛，我看到大海我看到大海上的渔船我看到渔船归来，渔民在笑我看到一筐筐海鲜，活蹦乱跳我看到海水晃动，沈家门浮在水面上 _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-06-19 02:07:22 Post subject:

建议《我终于说出了惊讶》改名为《舟山——跨海大桥》吧~~这样读起来一目了然又增添诗意~~不错的短诗~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-06-19 17:40:15 Post subject:

谢安姐姐来读。是改了直观。 _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-06-19 18:24:31 Post subject:

这些地名，富有诗意，令人向往，有诗佐读，更是惬意。 _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2010-06-22 02:29:32 Post subject:

如果约几个诗友一同喝酒.吃螃蟹.作诗也许更惬意....... 问好吟啸徐行 _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-06-22 06:02:02 Post subject:

桃花岛只是一个传说我知道，船走了海鸥占据的淤滩身后的足迹，海遥遥伸手，捡拾几个贝壳抛出去，消失在夜色中一直就这样孤单，传说中我是远来的少侠我可以临风飞翔，可以力拔山兮我可以很英俊，我的身边有一位美丽的娘子 _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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