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蔡交俊
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 04:06:46    Post subject: 尘 Reply with quote

《尘》

蔡交俊

春天,备足了和风细雨
经历一冬的花萼,打开就是鲜艳

让我们相依,就像柳树与槐树的拥抱
让我们亲近,就像蜜蜂与花朵的交流

纵有一千种苦难,都打开
不是虔诚的祝福,也应是含泪的祈祷

这一世的阳光和灿烂
就是为了你和我,否则何用
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 08:30:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎您来落尘!
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 08:33:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一段优雅而流畅,接着突显文字张力,收尾稍嫌。
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