昕阳一片
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 Posted: 2010-06-12 23:29:56 Post subject: 满江红•端午 |
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满江红•端午
昕阳一片
绿盛槐荫，佳节又﹑榴红如血。
梅雨久﹑也知时日，近来初歇。
角黍包金筵上列，香蒲临户波间切。
看鄙野﹑遍巷尾街头，同佳节。
殷勤意，由酒说。欢乐处，凭人阅。
叹龙舟竞发，直拥新月。
击鼓鸣金呼声劲，溅珠飞浪旋风捷。
料招得﹑深处汨罗魂，清高洁。
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-06-13 01:30:14 Post subject: |
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料招得﹑深处汨罗魂，清高洁。
妙词！
梅雨久﹑
江南梅雨季节，应过端午节后才入梅。这句似应斟酌。
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宁家珍
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| Posted: 2010-06-13 21:05:47 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏好词，问候昕阳一片诗友端午节快乐！ |
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-06-15 04:07:06 Post subject: |
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料招得﹑深处汨罗魂，清高洁。
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谢笑聊版主鼓励！入梅一般在6月上旬，应没有问题。谢谢您！端午快乐！ |
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-06-15 04:08:04 Post subject: |
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| 宁家珍 wrote: |
| 欣赏好词，问候昕阳一片诗友端午节快乐！ |
谢家珍诗友鼓励。端午快乐！ |
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