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暮恋二首
李日清
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PostPosted: 2010-06-10 18:46:35    Post subject: 暮恋二首 Reply with quote

《暮恋》
跌跌绊绊中风雨兼程
动荡不定的尘埃永无停顿
落日下的头发
伫望中凝聚成一轮踌躇的风景
无数个风雪急雨之夜
总有一双焦虑不安的眼睛饱满深情

幽深的夜晚
遮蔽不住饥馑的记忆与温暖的人生
在嘱托中行进 在疾风中驰骋
有激励的言词遍及全身
紧握叮咛 又朝思暮想中
怎样回馈难以舍割的乡村

《屋檐下》
从晨露至暮霭
就像家乡屋檐下坚守的鸟雀
在雷霆闪电中做巢
又风雪皑皑中觅食
我不需给予更多的恩惠通行
静思之余去寻找一条便利的捷径
让每一丝亮丽的色泽充满温馨

喧嚣不要前来打扰
雪一样的心境 露珠似的晶莹
避开虚妄 远离浮躁
给我插上坚硬的翅膀
山为骏马 水为轻舟
锤炼永不腐蚀的意念心比天高

握住身边仅余的温度
把内心燃烧的灯笼紧紧拥抱
渐渐地歌声的韵脚在四周缭绕
雨滴中绽开花朵轻捷的笑声
眼前的绿色已漫过山冈
与屋檐下的景致都倍感美妙
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2010-06-10 19:49:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

有激励的言词遍及全身
紧握叮咛 又朝思暮想中
怎样回馈难以舍割的乡村
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安红红
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2010-06-10 22:20:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第二首~

把内心燃烧的灯笼紧紧拥抱~~灯笼觉得和身体有小小的屏蔽一样~~若换作烛火呢~~私见~~
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李日清
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PostPosted: 2010-06-11 17:22:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

老师给以的评价深感欣慰,我更有了自信的信心。远握,编安!
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