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菩萨蛮 清明
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PostPosted: 2010-06-23 23:18:04    Post subject: 菩萨蛮 清明 Reply with quote

墨浓微蘸调竹影。水浮青叶深如井。垂笔日长留。谁家曾系舟。
舟中听雨后。绿柳牵人袖。回首却临窗。他乡为故乡。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-25 04:42:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎星子朋友!

水浮青叶深如井。此句在绘画技法上有说法?

欣赏好词!舟中听雨后。绿柳牵人袖。回首却临窗。他乡为故乡。

问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 00:35:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
欢迎星子朋友!
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您好,谢谢您的评价。
我粗浅地学过几节国画课,曾看书上说,画月夜背景时,在画的背面喷出水点,然后用清水轻轻将画面喷湿,用刷蘸花青加墨加水刷出云层。感觉很美。
我没有什么经验,只是学画月夜竹子时蘸墨掌握不好,浓淡不均,再用水来调,戏为“水浮青叶深如井”之句,且作笑料吧~~
另:非常惊奇,深深佩服您对诗句的敏感度。有些朋友读到这一句就过去了,只觉得顺口好听,我已满足。您的对诗与画的感受力真是非同一般。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 09:02:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

星子 wrote:
墨浓微蘸调竹影。水浮青叶深如井。垂笔日长留。谁家曾系舟。
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问好星子朋友。

回首却临窗。他乡为故乡。

故乡是他乡的守望,他乡是故乡的延长。。。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 14:41:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="星子"][quote="笑聊"]欢迎星子朋友!
...[/quote]
您好,谢谢您的评价。
...[/quote]

谢谢星子朋友的赞誉。我不会画画,读到“水浮青叶深如井”,这句时感觉理解不了,结合前一句时才明了是讲的绘画技法,但还不能肯定,于是,有此一问。其实诗画是一体的,相通的。
再次谢谢星子朋友的释疑。问好!
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