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原创：《诗意的陨落》

王晓静
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Posted: 2010-06-08 19:59:52 Post subject: 原创：《诗意的陨落》

诗意的陨落王晓静我打马经过一片田地唐风浩浩吹过不羁的离离荒草农人们正在收割工整的诗句丰腴的腰肢承载不了我对繁华的渴望我策马停在西风中纤手皓腕下勾勒着层层叠叠的莲样的心事宋雨潇潇打湿了几叶芭蕉却溅起一池闲愁我勒马回首遥望故都所有古典的向往都灰飞湮灭诗意的城池已陷落时光的洪流带走了春红匆匆只是借口这个墨色黄昏我迷失在一片宣纸的荒芜作者:王晓静, 地址：河南省鲁山县一高语文组 467300

俞伟远
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Posted: 2010-06-08 21:04:06 Post subject:

我策马停在西风中纤手皓腕下勾勒着层层叠叠的莲样的心事宋雨潇潇打湿了几叶芭蕉却溅起一池闲愁动词用得不错。问候。学习了 _________________ 俞伟远：１９６７生，１９８７大学毕业、工作。19９０年后几乎与诗绝缘，2006年春重拾笔，感悟生活，凝望心灵，自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan

王晓静
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Posted: 2010-06-10 01:54:57 Post subject:

问好俞伟远，谢谢点评！ _________________ 王晓静，河南省作协会员，通讯地址：河南省鲁山县第一高中语文组。邮编467300

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-06-12 19:11:07 Post subject:

唐宋时诗歌是一种文人的生活 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

王晓静
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Posted: 2010-06-16 17:51:54 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

唐宋时诗歌是一种文人的生活

谢谢点评，问好！

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Posted: 2010-06-17 19:44:22 Post subject:

华丽 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

王晓静
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Posted: 2010-06-19 19:53:12 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

华丽

问好韩兄，向您学习。

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-19 20:16:03 Post subject:

有落就有升

子在川上曰
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Posted: 2010-06-19 21:44:16 Post subject:

我勒马回首遥望故都所有古典的向往都灰飞湮灭诗意的城池已陷落时光的洪流带走了春红匆匆只是借口这个墨色黄昏我迷失在一片宣纸的荒芜 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

王晓静
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Posted: 2010-06-22 02:35:28 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

有落就有升

期待着诗歌的兴盛繁荣！问好白水！

安红红
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Posted: 2010-06-22 06:48:56 Post subject:

N多年后~~我们的诗也被称作“古诗”了~~好坏~~由得后人评~~ 唐诗宋词~~文学瑰宝~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

王晓静
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Posted: 2010-06-23 01:07:55 Post subject:

子在川上曰 wrote:

我勒马回首遥望故都
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问好子在川上曰！

王晓静
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Posted: 2010-06-23 01:12:50 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

N多年后~~我们的诗也被称作“古诗”了~~好坏~~由得后人评~~
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谢谢点评！期待唐诗宋词的复兴，期待诗歌的兴盛繁荣！

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