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〖金金作品〗鲜艳的芍药花

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Posted: 2010-06-10 02:46:14 Post subject: 〖金金作品〗鲜艳的芍药花

《鲜艳的芍药花》绿，突现出它的狂暴里有水韵水韵里有拥抱似的空阔红色、粉色和白色可以超越人的想象轻轻地想不对，要重重地想因为若就要抓不住什么…… 不要放弃想象蓝天里的行云红艳若模糊就象被撕扯的火，不出声燃叶片很象手在捧住阳光，不想让阳光转移芍药是一个过程，过程里被它自己的颜色燃而渐变色芍药是注重感情的花，——在其命途中由于重情，又被蝶、蜂、天空的注视点燃我要写芍药，是异于之前两段的第三段的芍药…… 芍药不要伤害着你自己在阳光里的目录，存在一个理想芍药！在风的吹拂里故去，还留着香源形状那，也是芍药，是睡的芍药——！ 2010年6月10日 17时25分成诗 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-06-10 18:05:29 Post subject:

沉稳中舒张着真实的情感

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Posted: 2010-06-10 19:42:09 Post subject:

问好白水：）祝你天天都很快乐 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-06-11 07:24:17 Post subject:

问好金金 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2010-06-12 00:20:17 Post subject:

上城兄对我的诗歌是否失望之极？：）问好你 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-06-12 06:51:08 Post subject:

怎么可能呢。我也觉得自己没有什么突破。写实的诗歌总不算最好的诗歌。——对自己的反思。还长着呢。要多吃些海龟蛋，先把身体养好。才能去远海钓大鱼。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2010-06-13 07:52:25 Post subject:

问好金金~~ 楼上的回复真搞笑的~~呵呵~乐死了~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-06-14 23:18:52 Post subject:

端午快乐！：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-06-15 00:09:39 Post subject:

芍药不要伤害着你自己在阳光里的目录，存在一个理想芍药！在风的吹拂里故去，还留着香源形状那，也是芍药，是睡的芍药——！喜欢的诗歌！ _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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