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七律•月夜读诗尽消暑步韵苏轼送穆越州（新韵）
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PostPosted: 2010-08-07 04:56:12    Post subject: 七律•月夜读诗尽消暑步韵苏轼送穆越州（新韵） Reply with quote
七律•月夜读诗尽消暑步韵苏轼送穆越州（新韵）
斗室天南二十年，卷黄书在慰苍颜。
今宵酒醒蝉声上，昨日风流荷露间。
克已花香留我见，铭石仙玉取他山。
读诗且趁心情好，莫放高楼雪月闲。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-07 14:32:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
昨日风流荷露間---瀟灑!
铬石仙玉取他山---進取!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 02:50:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
今宵酒醒蝉声上，昨日风流荷露间。
读诗且趁心情好，莫放高楼雪月闲。

诗句耐读有味。

“莫放高楼雪月闲。”东坡句，好象昕阳一片以此句为题也写了一首七律。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 04:39:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
久不见白云斑斑


莫放高楼雪月闲

这是个作业

大家写
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 10:10:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
問好影沉寒水!
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