米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
米运刚Collection |
 Posted: 2010-05-22 18:34:42 Post subject: 山中四月 |
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山中四月
山中四月杏初黄，夹衣未褪风留香。蝶舞霓云贪刺瑰，蜂鸣嫩蕊扑新蔷。
语软苔滑念未断，情多露重思犹长。停车但观绵里水，一步一趣一铿锵。 |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
米运刚Collection |
| Posted: 2010-05-22 18:39:51 Post subject: |
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| 又有些时日没能与诗友相聚了，米运刚在这里向各位问好了！ |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-05-23 01:21:34 Post subject: |
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运刚兄好！
停车但观绵里水，一步一趣一铿锵。
欣赏！ |
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影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
影沉寒水Collection |
| Posted: 2010-05-23 04:31:24 Post subject: |
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语软苔滑念未断，情多露重思犹长。
喜欢这联
流畅动人
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
| Posted: 2010-05-23 07:34:58 Post subject: |
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全诗流暢,景情交融!
尤以:"情多露重思犹长.一步一趣一铿锵",精彩!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
米运刚Collection |
| Posted: 2010-05-25 02:20:44 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢三位仁兄雅评！ |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2010-05-27 09:42:26 Post subject: |
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寄情于境，思绪绵联。
久未见，问好! |
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