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猜火车
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PostPosted: 2010-05-24 17:03:57    Post subject: 猜火车 Reply with quote

猜火车




过去一列火车

和谐号的车身

不似最初的绿皮

闪身而过的速度

已经无法细数车节

看不见车窗里的民工

质朴的把你当做风景







猜火车 儿时的游戏

放羊的孩子 都在哪里

连羊群都消逝在铁轨两边

重新站在当初的地方

已经猜不出下一列的起止

偶尔猜对一个熟悉的起点

猜不了提升的速度 模糊的终点









遇见一个衣锦还乡的老板

猜火车 他问

猜火车 我答

他想向我炫耀他的财富

和动车上的优越感

我却把他当初的罪恶

和我的影子交错

时光就乱作优良布匹

量身定做成西装

将原罪包裹在里面

谁是谁谁谁

谁不是谁谁谁



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PostPosted: 2010-05-24 18:36:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

有味有道
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PostPosted: 2010-05-26 01:03:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢金金支持,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-26 02:37:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

和谐号的速度很快~~坐里面感觉到没火车安全~不知为什么~
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