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组诗:咱也评评水浒人物
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 21:57:51    Post subject: 组诗:咱也评评水浒人物 Reply with quote

看《水浒》生气,拣几个评他一评!

宋江
“及时雨”也不济事
“呼保义”图有虚名
单凭杀阎婆惜算不得英雄
优柔寡断 婆婆妈妈
为了一身红袍
出卖众家弟兄
梁山泊根本不缺你这号人

李俊
有勇有谋的天才
深知鸟尽弓藏的道理
梁山泊若是你来当家
说不准就推翻了赵家天下
“混江龙”名不虚传

林冲
八十万禁军教头
响当当的“豹子头”
仇起美娘子
祸缘白虎堂
忍气忍不得
报仇报不得
空有一身武力
枉自堂堂丈夫
剩下的没法说你
就是受气的命
冤!
不如早死了好

阮小七
梁山泊真正的强者
江湖上一等一的“活阎罗”
披上黄袍咱也过过皇帝的瘾
谁稀罕做什么鸟官
老天也要捅它个窟窿

李逵
“哇呀呀”一对板斧
天不怕地不怕的好汉
造反不死 招安不死 征方腊不死
偏偏被那黑三愚弄
一杯毒酒
寥儿洼多了一条冤魂
这厮还睡在梦里

吴用
吴用当真吴用
只能做黑三郎的附庸
折损了大好前程
倘若跟随了方腊
成就一番伟业也并非不可能

2007 3 10
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 22:03:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

反评
还是评反
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 22:10:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

快速漫画英雄。潇洒豪放。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 11:26:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

两位老兄夸奖,我这是“乱评”,呵呵。
如有兴趣,小弟就再接着“瞎评”几个。
还望不吝赐教。
谢过。
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