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又见陶器[外一首]
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PostPosted: 2010-06-12 19:23:38    Post subject: 又见陶器[外一首] Reply with quote

《 又见陶器》[外一首]
虽说粗糙
那是乡村最淳朴的邂逅
它就大大方方地
摆放在我的桌上
纹路是那样的清晰
色调是那样的正派
这就像我们厮守中的爱情
历经风雨 打磨出
如此招人的相貌

如获至宝的陶器
不要和青花瓷的卓约风姿去媲美
不要和富丽堂皇的牡丹相提并论
在落寞与忧虑中并肩
在香甜与喜悦中共享

又见陶器那是生命中最珍贵的伴侣
好好珍惜 倍加呵护
让幸福的甘露
遍及生活中的每一个角落

《 摊开尘封的日子》
白发在深藏不露中
开始逐一拔节
在颠簸的路途上
洒下一阵笑语又一串汗滴
所有的视线中到处充满感激

在生活的贴近处
无论走到任何角落
总会被熟悉而温和的背影所牵引
夕阳再次将乡下的时光映红
一粒饱满的谷穗充实着
我日益健壮的胃口
每次翻开那一双双茧花绽放的手掌
馨香扑鼻 目光盈盈

当穿针引线的动作
把烛光又一次拔亮
寒风四起的夜空中
一首久唱不厌的童谣
将我带入温暖的梦香

尘封的日子依次摊开
一张张沧桑的面孔
倾注着更多的瞩望
每一次艰辛的劳作中
培育出欲加茁壮的禾苗
在知冷知热中
倒映出你们红润的面容








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PostPosted: 2010-06-12 19:30:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

行文流畅
作为散文诗歌好些
作为现代诗歌,缺乏了新奇之意
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