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《如果可以》
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PostPosted: 2010-05-19 17:22:24    Post subject: 《如果可以》 Reply with quote

《如果可以》

文/大侠仙子
一.
我经常在一些文字里迷失
就像那天我发给你的那个电子文件
点击“发送”时,邮箱竟然打了个趔趄
很多天我对自己文字上的拙劣耿耿于怀
就象今天,关于思念,关于想念,关于感念
我一直无法取舍
我感觉老祖宗真是太过精明
一直算计着我心里的浪漫
我只要打错一个字
就会误上灵魂深处那一艘狂放的贼船
二.
我经常在一些臆想中失去方向感
譬如昨天,来不及让另一边腮红扑面
就仓惶地坐上一艘飞船
去一个超级大国聆听你扣人心弦的演讲
我迟到了很多年
疾驰的奔跑让我的妆容凌乱不堪
你依然笑容可掬侃侃而谈
很多人举手发言
我结一根缰绳勒住了心里那匹瘦马
搭乘你送的纸飞机竟然也安全到家
三.
我常常迷恋于儿时的游戏
如果可以,我们假扮一次小夫妻
我假装爱你
抓一把春泥捏一个我捏一个你
然后把你我捏在一起
然后,然后我把你带回家里
如果妈妈同意我天天为你洗衣
如果爸爸点头我把他的香烟全都偷去给你
你天天写诗啥也别做
只负责看我头上的花簪要怎样斜插才会更加好看

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PostPosted: 2010-05-20 04:01:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

这朵花拍得怎样?没人发言?
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PostPosted: 2010-05-20 08:22:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

姐姐诗是好诗。花好象迟暮了些,让人不忍多看!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-20 15:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

晴天雨天 wrote:
姐姐诗是好诗。花好象迟暮了些,让人不忍多看!

说得没错,这一朵叫白头宫娥。与诗意不符,纯粹是为邮显摆我的拍摄技术。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-21 04:44:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

我常常迷恋于儿时的游戏
如果可以,我们假扮一次小夫妻
我假装爱你
抓一把春泥捏一个我捏一个你
然后把你我捏在一起
然后,然后我把你带回家里
如果妈妈同意我天天为你洗衣
如果爸爸点头我把他的香烟全都偷去给你
你天天写诗啥也别做
只负责看我头上的花簪要怎样斜插才会更加好看
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