Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2010-05-29 17:51:43 Post subject: Peak Time |
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the entrance
of the
parking lot
where
everything halts
except
in the glare of
headlights
two geese waddle
around _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2010-05-30 18:34:48 Post subject: |
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很有趣味!
I think it may be better if it is
"at the entrance"
(it would be: everything halts at the entrance....)
also, "peak hour" is more commonly used.
peak time is fine too.
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Lake 举人

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Posted: 2010-05-31 09:48:06 Post subject: |
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Thanks for the feedback from the antic, antique typewriter.
I see what you mean.
Thanks much,博弈!
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