影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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 Posted: 2010-05-06 07:11:29 Post subject: 七律·当春有怀 |
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七律·当春有怀
融雪不知追梦人，枝头新绿晓迎春。
几回摇曳在村野，十载飘浮寄客身。
浊酒消勤水月恨，清宵断醒镜花尘。
为文诗网通天下，一任墨心书虎寅。
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崔光全
童生
Joined: 03 May 2010
Posts: 14
Location: 内蒙古阿拉善盟阿左旗巴镇南田新村北三巷21#
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 14:10:51 Post subject: |
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| 赏读了，问好 |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 17:59:11 Post subject: |
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与影沉寒水唱和一首《浪淘沙》:
. . 浪 淘 沙 . .
十載虽浮寄客身,
抒怀前望百花欣.
青春奋力創基业.
待到功成喜笑真!
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 19:21:07 Post subject: |
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与寒水兄唱和一首：
临屏即兴赋七绝－贵在拼搏
几回拼搏挣扎中，商海浮沉血泪同。
信念常怀应磨砺，笑迎失败当为功。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-05-07 03:18:56 Post subject: |
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谢谢二位斑斑鼓励
遥祝福
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昕阳一片
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Joined: 27 Mar 2010
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| Posted: 2010-05-08 02:40:02 Post subject: |
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为文诗网通天下，一任墨心书虎寅。
欣赏佳作。问好寒水！ |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-05-08 03:49:45 Post subject: |
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昕阳周末好
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