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七律·春雨楼台步韵田建勋
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PostPosted: 2010-05-08 03:52:25    Post subject: 七律·春雨楼台步韵田建勋 Reply with quote

七律·春雨楼台步韵田建勋

春雨楼台夜未深,捧书窗下尚逡巡。

遥思千古东山客,不忘跟前岐路人。

一线灵魂应有讯,百年梦幻总无心。

匆留诗笔向天问,谁见清宵三籁吟。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-08 04:13:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

匆留诗笔向天问,谁见清宵三籁吟。结句有力。

有一词不甚明了:“三籁”指什么?
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PostPosted: 2010-05-08 07:29:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

影沉寒水,能略释一下诗意吗?以助理解.
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PostPosted: 2010-05-08 07:57:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
影沉寒水,能略释一下诗意吗?以助理解.


赞同。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-08 08:27:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

自是思无涯。 细细体味,可得人生修炼中一些精深微妙之理。

又,三籁即天籁与人籁、地籁。(《庄子》齐物论)
天籁风与万物融溶为一,无损耗;而人籁地籁之风则互相磨砺,都有损耗。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-09 02:54:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
自是思无涯。 细细体味,可得人生修炼中一些精深微妙之理。
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谢谢冰清帮助回答朋友们的问题

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