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七绝咏竹

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Posted: 2010-04-27 14:18:26 Post subject: 七绝咏竹

七绝咏竹青翠节高身自直，枝成墨画叶成诗。迎风披雨精神在，饱受艰辛谁尽知？

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-04-28 05:43:54 Post subject:

问好庆宏兄！赞赏“迎风披雨精神在，饱受艰辛谁尽知？”句。把竹的精神；默默无语的承受表露无遗。

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Posted: 2010-04-28 06:39:02 Post subject:

庆宏好诗! 高节身自直---精彩佳句! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-04-28 07:06:43 Post subject:

节是入声字哦 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-04-28 08:32:22 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好庆宏兄！
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谢笑聊兄雅赏。

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Posted: 2010-04-28 08:32:48 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

庆宏好诗!
高节身自直---精彩佳句!

谢白云老师雅赏。

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Posted: 2010-04-28 08:35:01 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

节是入声字哦

谢寒水兄探讨。“节”在《新华字典》是第二声，应该属于平声。也许古韵里是入声？

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Posted: 2010-04-28 08:35:57 Post subject:

庆宏,如果用古韵,那么,因平仄关系,"高节身自直"是否可变为"节高身自直"呢? _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-04-28 08:39:23 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

庆宏,因平仄关系,"高节身自直"是否可变为"节高身自直"呢?

谢谢白云老师指点。这一改，非常好，避开了“节”本身的新旧韵平仄问题。

七绝咏竹

青翠节高身自直，枝成墨画叶成诗。
迎风披雨精神在，饱受艰辛谁尽知？

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Posted: 2010-04-29 11:43:08 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝咏竹
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庆宏兄，改得好，依韵一首，请赐教：

七绝咏竹

春日山林又发枝，风吹剑影舞雄姿。
俗流不共持高节，三友岁寒同入诗。

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Posted: 2010-04-29 14:47:15 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝咏竹
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庆宏兄，改得好，依韵一首，请赐教：
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谢谢秋叶兄和诗！“风吹剑影舞雄姿”好句！

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