影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2010-04-15 06:09:59 Post subject: 七律·感时西南（新韵） |
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七律·感时西南（新韵）
谁倩春风君可知，江山轮转虎当值。
啸声远渡梅林晚，跨步流星雨水迟。
早过天南冰泮日，愁思垄上稻谋时。
空修感叹望东海，一介书生热血诗。
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-04-15 06:36:37 Post subject: |
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热血诗,寒水詞.望东海,叹雨迟!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2010-04-15 06:50:22 Post subject: |
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空修感叹望东海，一介书生热血诗。
佳句！书生爱心跃然纸上！问好！ |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2010-04-15 08:33:14 Post subject: |
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| 有心除旱，无力回天。 |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2010-04-15 19:13:33 Post subject: |
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观注西南,感激寒水!
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-04-16 02:56:35 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 有心除旱，无力回天。 |
正是此等状况
问好师友们
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