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转红陌诗帖:《爱人的坟墓开满鲜花》
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PostPosted: 2010-04-09 21:35:49    Post subject: 转红陌诗帖:《爱人的坟墓开满鲜花》 Reply with quote

《爱人的坟墓开满鲜花》

离开现场即变为印象,美和死亡是那样近,我不过一个模仿者。
- ------题记:红陌


我的爱人开满鲜花
我爱人的坟墓开满鲜花
我的爱人明天死

明天,我的爱人穿裙子来
睡衣一样的裙子,不佩戴任何装饰
我知道,我的幸福就要降临
爱人说
请吻我额头,并把我抱紧。抱紧。

爱人的裙子是荷叶,脸是荷花
爱人的被子是荷叶,胳膊是藕

爱人的坟墓是荷叶
我的爱人开满鲜花


《假想是未来的印象》

假想是一根印象的芦苇
折断数节
就会扎破月亮

月亮落在池塘边
水一晃动
就有无数个月亮
芦苇的睫毛
忽闪忽闪,让月亮心神不定

水面渐渐平静
月亮渐渐减少
八个 六个 四个 两个
我要掀掉最后两个月亮的壳
那笼罩的两块云朵

那是两块薄薄的布
比荷花还红

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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 04:53:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

假想是一根印象的芦苇
折断数节
就会扎破月亮——欣赏好诗。美!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 07:31:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

水面渐渐平静
月亮渐渐减少
八个 六个 四个 两个
我要掀掉最后两个月亮的壳
那笼罩的两块云朵

那是两块薄薄的布
比荷花还红

西西,好意境,羞涩的情感。。。欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 17:20:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺灵动的一组, 欣赏。
少君,为何不请红陌来和大家一起交流, 以文会友? Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-04-12 02:49:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

代红陌谢过楼上各位 !她年纪大了,不会打字,请我代劳。
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