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神谕(外2首)
吟啸徐行
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PostPosted: 2010-04-07 00:48:16    Post subject: 神谕(外2首) Reply with quote

《神谕》

千百遍锻打
才有这一把新月
我磨锋利
带回五月的田野

田野是被贬的天空吗
你也一道下凡
遇上,一地
长高,且已成熟的阳光

遭贬的嫦娥
就在你身边
上帝说,割完人间的麦子
你们一起回天堂

《回想》

粗粗的雨,扯来扯去
像纳鞋底

但不如薄阴天气
东风绷紧三月
细细的雨丝
绣桃花,梨花

绣出我好看的乡村
可妈妈的花绷子
深藏在地下
绣着我看不见的风景

《河心岛》

河水向下滑了一节
露出岛美丽的腰围
不久,水又提了提
提到了岛的胸际

这岛一直站在河心
与我隔着一段无法消除的距离
多少年过去
来来往往

我只看见它的上半身
它好看的臀部
藏在水的裙裾里
让我想到一传统的女子
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金金
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PostPosted: 2010-04-07 02:48:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

真不错,能把故事在客观上写得完全没补的余地吗?
问好
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-04-08 17:54:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

坐沙发 Very Happy
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