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清明.兄弟

戴永良
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Joined: 28 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2010-04-05 20:32:50 Post subject: 清明.兄弟

你再听不到我的忿愤也看不到父母苍凉的身影你忘了当儿子的责任即使后悔，也是下辈子的事为了一钱不值的恋情却采用最极端的方式在二十四岁轻易地放弃了自己抛弃了最爱你的人你的痴情早已化为灰烬用心深处的无知好不顾念耐心的忠告成全自己荒唐的完美最后一刻的悔恨曾让我的感情崩溃握着你冰凉的手我无法控制自己的泪水十二年不愿触及的苦痛在清明节涌上心头毕竟是我最亲的兄弟所有的爱所有的痛哽咽在喉清明节的祭让父母因为你把痛苦扛起你放生的麻雀陪伴着在坟茔悲泣 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国
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Posted: 2010-04-06 07:53:40 Post subject:

叙事比较清楚，然而诗意不在。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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