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诗词两首

周志桥
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Posted: 2010-03-27 17:56:45 Post subject: 诗词两首

诗词两首周志桥踏青丽日和风满目清，嫩杨烟柳燕莺鸣。草青麦绿层层浪，桃李生花朵朵红。远眺苍山拂岚影，近闻溪水庆歌丰。灵园仙境游人醉，倩影翩翩絮絮萦。思念冰释阳和俏柳柔，绿原苍野不同秋。怀乡莺燕双双返，戏水鸳鸯对对游。诗瘾一竿心绪皱，笛声几阵相思稠。伊人鸿信何时到，解意桃花泪湿眸。联系地址：（053400）河北省武邑县紫塔乡西桑生村联系人：周志桥联系电话：13730520427

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-27 19:08:06 Post subject:

学习欣赏并问好！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-27 19:29:09 Post subject:

景色丽意缠绵! 問好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

周志桥
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Posted: 2010-03-27 22:48:37 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

景色丽意缠绵!
問好!

多谢关注问好。

金沙浪子
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Joined: 21 Jul 2008
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Posted: 2010-03-28 23:27:07 Post subject:

立意高，句奇！更喜思念。浪子问好！ _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-03-29 10:35:04 Post subject:

意境很好。 “草青麦绿层层浪，桃李生花朵朵红。” 如进一步推敲对仗更好。

周志桥
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Posted: 2010-04-06 16:58:32 Post subject: 修改稿

诗词二首周志桥踏青媚日和风满目清，俊杨嫩柳燕莺鸣。锦田披绿层层浪，桃李生花朵朵红。远眺苍山拂碧影，近闻溪水庆歌丰。灵园仙境游人醉，倩影翩翩絮絮萦。思念冰释阳和俏柳柔，绿原苍野不同秋。怀乡紫燕双双返，戏水鸳鸯对对游。诗瘾一竿心绪皱，笛声几阵相思稠。伊人鸿信何时到，解意桃花泪湿眸。

米运刚
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Posted: 2010-04-07 04:25:39 Post subject:

“诗瘾一竿心绪皱，笛声几阵相思稠。”好句！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-04-07 06:17:52 Post subject:

问好！欣赏佳联：怀乡紫燕双双返，戏水鸳鸯对对游。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-04-07 10:18:55 Post subject:

改进效果明显。两首意境很好。问好诗友。

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