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车过南山崴
杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-04-16 16:20:13    Post subject: 车过南山崴 Reply with quote

车过南山崴

真是奇怪
车过南山崴
我旁边的女人
突然开始无声地哭泣
她哭得那样伤心 那样可怜
好像失去了爱情
又像失去了亲情
看 手帕上盛开的百合都被她揉碎了

她目光呆滞
不停地望着窗外
啊 我看见了
我看见了美丽的景象——
缓慢的山坡上开满了金黄的油菜花
我看见了
一些飞舞的蝴蝶
一群在阳光下奔跑的孩子
一些在草丛中挖掘黄金的鸡
啊 我还看见——
一挂木马车 两棵老梨树 三间破草房
在五月静默的风中
它们向这儿张望

她抽噎得更厉害了
时光从她的指缝间向外泄露
她的悲伤在向外泄露
整个人陷入悲痛的水里
无声地挣扎 扭曲 变形
一直到小城子她才减弱了哭泣
到郭家店
像一阵风消失在人流的树林里

这是多年前
发生在故乡的一幕
一些意象像故乡的灯火
闪灭在我的记忆里
在生命里留下悬念
它们是——
油菜花、蝴蝶、鸡、孩子
一挂木马车、两棵老梨树、三间破草房
最后是一张女人哭泣的脸!

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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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杨光
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PostPosted: 2007-04-16 18:27:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

娓娓道来,描写很细致
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杨光的语言空间

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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-04-17 00:34:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好杨光诗人!!
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——拙作《离开村庄》
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-04-17 04:44:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

提纯不够
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杯中冲浪.披履而行
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 15:53:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢冲浪兄,呵呵。祝好。 Very Happy
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——拙作《离开村庄》
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