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用“桃花“造句
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 19:27:43    Post subject: 用“桃花“造句 Reply with quote

用“桃花“造句

如果我是小学生,用“桃花“造句
首先会想到她的“红“,比如:桃花
天真烂漫地红了一塌糊涂地红了
精神抖擞热情奔放地红了
干干净净简简单单地红了
如果学会了夸张
就说桃花染红了春天
如果学了比喻
会说桃花像老师的脸蛋

那年教语文的新老师穿白衬衫
红外套,笑眯眯,名字叫赵桃英
十九岁的赵老师,扎着桃枝一样的麻花辫
一张会突然红起来的脸
不知怎的,在春天没结束时疯了
有时一个人低头走着唱歌的赵老师
有时望着一个鸟窝久久发呆赵老师
头发蓬乱的赵老师
始终没能听到我造的关于春天的句子

三十多年过去了,不知赵老师的身体怎样
她也一定老了
认不出当年三年级的我了
现在我把想造的句子写下
就是读不出声来
它们一直晃着刀子的锋芒
而我的手正握着刀柄
2010-3-23
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 19:30:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

如果我是小学生,用“桃花“造句
首先会想到她的“红“,比如:桃花
天真烂漫地红了一塌糊涂地红了
精神抖擞热情奔放地红了
干干净净简简单单地红了
如果学会了夸张
就说桃花染红了春天
如果学了比喻
会说桃花像老师的脸蛋

开头很别致的!问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-24 02:44:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢鼓励。问好朋友
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