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知识
叶英儿
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Joined: 03 Jun 2006
Posts: 577
Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2010-03-24 05:37:40    Post subject: 知识 Reply with quote

你就是一道亮丽的风景
在我人生必经的路上站立
是我提高内在素质
提高精神品质
进行武装头脑的思想宝库
你是思想宝典
幼稚的人阅读你会变得成熟
失意的人阅读你会变得精神饱满
不自信的人阅读你会自信满满
孤独的人阅读你会热血沸腾 奋发有为 不再寂寞
失恋的人阅读你会不再忧伤
痛苦的人阅读你会忘记伤痛
坚强的人阅读你会更加坚定 意气风发

你是贵人
你是一本集智慧 人生精华 意志信念于一体的大典
苦难的人看了你
会走出泥沼
青春年少的人看了你
会蓓蕾绽放 意气飞扬
在奔往前程路上的人看了你
都会发自内心的微笑
沿着你的足迹前行
你是伟人
我们全人类都伏匋在你的脚下
我们无比热爱你
我们无比崇拜你
我们都在创造你
我们都在你的赐福里
幸福地生活着
(浙江、叶英儿)
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安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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PostPosted: 2010-03-24 08:02:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

立意很好~ 要表达的也到位了~语言上还需要斟酌下~散了些~
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