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七绝* 浅寐未央

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-29 14:17:00 Post subject: 七绝* 浅寐未央

七绝* 浅寐未央（一）独系兰舟咏碧莲，折弯晓月伴孤帆，沾巾弱水湿长夜，不肯浊流浸远山。（二）月沉西窗又五更，灯芯剪断袅诗魂，不知浅梦终结处，是否低吟寄故人？（2009．12．28 ）

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-12-29 14:19:58 Post subject:

白水兄好诗！情深意远。

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-29 14:25:51 Post subject:

谢谢qinghongh

连南河
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Posted: 2009-12-29 20:06:28 Post subject:

画意情深! 问好白水 Moonlight,新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-30 11:43:19 Post subject:

问好连南河，新年快乐!

冰清
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Posted: 2009-12-31 19:27:43 Post subject:

字字真切感人。（之二）以问作结，深婉含蓄，诗尽，而味永!

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-01 11:15:20 Post subject:

问好冰清老师，这两首诗歌的灵感来自与你的交谈，更是为你女性的美德所感动

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Posted: 2010-03-20 11:39:41 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好冰清老师，这两首诗歌的灵感来自与你的交谈，更是为你女性的美德所感动

呵呵，白水言重。灵感来自你的敏悟和善性。不是吗? 上善若水! 感动，随一首：

夜夜心/ 冰清

人间何事可销魂？
带断鸳鸯夜夜心。
纵是韜吟能解语，
三更惊梦拭啼痕。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-20 15:18:04 Post subject:

唱和俱佳! 問好冰清! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-20 21:08:21 Post subject:

谢谢冰请老师的和诗，收藏了。问好白云老师

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-21 02:22:37 Post subject:

沾巾弱水湿长夜，不肯浊流浸远山。问好白水！至性至情，刚直不阿！佳句大赏！

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-25 20:04:19 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊，有段时间没写古韵，见笑

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-26 09:11:25 Post subject:

請白水多临古韵新音指导! 謝謝! 问好白水! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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