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原创《与君书》
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PostPosted: 2010-03-21 22:53:30    Post subject: 原创《与君书》 Reply with quote

《与君书》

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一.
俯身拾起一叶苍凉
刹那间颠覆一个季节
想穿越你的眸子
又怕碎了那些经年的脉络
指尖可以把甲古文剌穿
却不能敲响你的键盘
翻转,从岁月的背景里醒来
你的剧本里找不到我的角色

二.
这个城市繁荣昌盛
夜晚灯火辉煌
白天花飞草长
拥挤的人群里你背负沉重的翅膀
遍寻梦想起飞的地方
所有的爱远离人间
你夜夜栖息在自己的后花园
三.

在一个地下室里
你撩开城市的衣袂
让自己蛰伏在地球的内核
卑微是你俯冲的姿态
让灵魂炙烤着悲喜人生
你目光如炬
随时准备点燃自己

四.
趟过季节的冰凌
我很想在你的诗里站成一个浮萍
词语背后是彻骨地冷
梨花桃花散落一地
谁的暗香已被抽空
焚烬,可不可以重塑一个人生
你心里的温柔何日对接阳光

五.

牵挂漫延成一些种子
蜿蜒爬满梦里画廊
一些话语种在心里早已枝繁叶茂
却无法让花朵冲出喉咙
日子长长短短长出的都是疼痛
手心里布满青剌
每一次拔出都是你倔强的名字

六.

寂寞正在丰盈大鹏的羽翼
是谁孤独了你的人生
我忍住眼泪
只是不想成为你腾空的负累
思念久治不愈榻寒衿凉
梦里可曾相依
公交车一个转身迎春花全都失忆

七.
子夜的出口在哪里
我被放逐在城市的边缘
银河里的星星灯火通明
看不到鸟儿前世牵的那根红线
黑夜吞咽着白昼的孤单
苍膺在崖壁上独自嘶鸣
冷风里,啸声呜咽

八.

月亮落入你漆黑的眸子
我的脚步踉踉跄跄
一些皈依的病句里
我们害着同样的疾患
酒精,药钳,撕去旧伤
新的疤痕总能让人疼痛入骨
那就,让我们在一些笔画里相互搀扶

九.
抱紧我吧,尽管
十指舞不出浪漫的天鹅湖
但你可以想象我是你的三寸金莲
所有的过往风吹即散
我围炉饮菊,你隔岸奏弦
偶尔杖碎一地汉字
为我拾起那支弱不盈发的簪
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PostPosted: 2010-03-22 00:44:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

主观的夸张连接不算好,气还不错。问好!!!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-22 08:51:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

抱紧我吧,尽管
十指舞不出浪漫的天鹅湖
但你可以想象我是你的三寸金莲
所有的过往风吹即散
我围炉饮菊,你隔岸奏弦
偶尔杖碎一地汉字
为我拾起那支弱不盈发的簪

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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 08:31:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
主观的夸张连接不算好,气还不错。问好!!!


谢谢指点,问好朋友!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 08:35:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
抱紧我吧,尽管
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谢谢红,问好春安!
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