影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2010-03-31 04:58:56 Post subject: 七律。新春闻友返乡 |
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七律。新春闻友返乡（新韵）
岁掩大寒新序开，春风滴雨润襟怀
小梅含蕊清幽吐，嫩柳呈烟寂寞埋
客取阳关车马去，信从空宇雁鸿来
祝君千里家园健，只道团圆不道哀
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-03-31 05:52:54 Post subject: |
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问好寒水兄！临屏接口绝句依韵和一首：
绝句-春日闲赋之六
只道团圆不道哀，春风得意柳柔怀。
艳阳晒去来年冷，但觉花魁四季开。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-03-31 10:00:51 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳!
影沉寒水,祝你永葆"春风滴雨润襟怀"的愉悦情愫!
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-04-01 04:40:42 Post subject: |
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只道团圆不道哀，春风得意柳柔怀。
谢谢笑聊诗友临屏赐和
遥握
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-04-01 04:41:27 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳!
影沉寒水,祝你永葆"春风滴雨润襟怀"的愉悦情愫! |
谢谢白云斑斑
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| Posted: 2010-04-01 10:33:27 Post subject: |
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| 春风阳关道，千里把乡还。 |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-04-01 19:55:16 Post subject: |
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闻友返乡,春风满怀,
诗情洋溢,鸿雁飞来!
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-04-02 04:45:57 Post subject: |
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问好楼上二位诗兄
谢谢评读
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