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《红尾巴的寂寞》

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Posted: 2010-03-30 05:13:13 Post subject: 《红尾巴的寂寞》

<红尾巴的寂寞> 思念时世界剩下一条河你在那岸我在这边你的影子和我的影子在河水中有个有鳞有鳍的交点我的寂寞是一只红尾巴的鸟飞起时总是找不到你的鱼藏在了什么水藻它只能不停地叫不停地叫直到有个人知道有一颗心在为她燃烧

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