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开开茅塞[蝶翼组歌]
君山楚女
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 21:29:22    Post subject: 开开茅塞[蝶翼组歌] Reply with quote

漫山的杜鹃花火红
圈养的东北虎是条大懒虫

无水无泥的裸沙打不了墙
没肝没肺的人你须要多加提防

刚出土的春笋儿一节节飞长
年轻人有气节,前程不可限量

野花虽美,喜欢随风儿招摇虚晃
阳台上那瓶花,娴静中向你专注芬芳

对心直嘴快的人你休要疏远、拒绝
门庭冷落时最在乎你的其实只有那群麻雀

蚊子为了得到一滴血要嗡嗡苦叫,大做文章
远不比一举酒杯一声“同干”来得利索、清爽

夹紧尾巴的狗不见得没有疯
过分自谦的人是一本耐人琢磨的经


自圆其说:《蝶翼》是本人自创的一种诗歌形式,一首只有两行,如蝶翼双张。这组诗歌中由七首组成,内容上单独成篇。这与信天游的民歌体是不同的。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 10:26:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

夹紧尾巴的狗不见得没有疯
过分自谦的人是一本耐人琢磨的经


哲理,爽气
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 17:42:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水兄。向您 问好!
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