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临江仙新春登枇杷山

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Posted: 2010-03-14 21:00:48 Post subject: 临江仙新春登枇杷山

枇杷山,位于重庆渝中区中部,是重庆核心城市的最高点,海拔345米,南临长江,北面嘉陵江.此山得名由来有三:1.原来山上多植枇杷树.2.山形似琵琶.3.相传山上住过一位美丽的姑娘,每夜弹琵琶召唤南岸的爱人.我神往第三个得名的传说.若将"枇杷山"改之为"琵琶山"则更富传奇浪漫色彩. 倚杖登山乡梦醒,和风疏雨林花.几多银发挽春霞.红星亭上客, 远眺水之涯. 南岸良人犹在否?清风夜夜琵琶.声声呼唤付流沙.大江何渺渺, 代代唱蒹葭. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-03-14 21:47:48 Post subject:

临江仙•新春登枇杷山枇杷山，位于重庆渝中区中部，是重庆核心城市的最高点，海拔345米，南临长江，北面嘉陵江。此山得名由来有三：1、原来山上多植枇杷树。2、山形似琵琶。3、相传山上住过一位美丽的姑娘，每夜弹琵琶召唤南岸的爱人。我神往第三个得名的传说，若将“枇杷山”改之为“琵琶山”则更富传奇浪漫色彩。倚杖登山乡梦醒，和风疏雨林花。几多银发挽春霞，红星亭上客，远眺水之涯。南岸良人犹在否？清风夜夜琵琶。声声呼唤付流沙，大江何渺渺，代代唱蒹葭。拜读，欣赏，学习，问好！

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Posted: 2010-03-14 22:03:14 Post subject:

诚谢李兄评阅,问新春好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-03-15 01:44:51 Post subject:

倚杖登山乡梦醒,和风疏雨林花.几多银发挽春霞.红星亭上客, 远眺水之涯. 南岸良人犹在否?清风夜夜琵琶.声声呼唤付流沙.大江何渺渺, 代代唱蒹葭. 问好黄老师!学习大作.欣赏大作!

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Posted: 2010-03-15 02:15:27 Post subject:

谢笑聊兄赏阅.问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-03-15 07:32:41 Post subject:

大江何渺渺, 代代唱蒹葭. 真是好结情思绵绵渺渺 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-03-15 09:33:38 Post subject:

韵婉风雅,色彩浪漫. 好詞! 黄兄问好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-03-15 19:08:18 Post subject:

谢影沉兄,白云兄点评,向二位问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-03-17 02:39:21 Post subject:

入驻这里看到的第一首诗，楼主写得很好，有幸拜读。

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Posted: 2010-03-17 03:44:37 Post subject:

欢迎光临,谢谢阅读.过奖了! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-03-17 07:15:51 Post subject:

倚杖登山乡梦醒，和风疏雨林花。几多银发挽春霞，红星亭上客，远眺水之涯。南岸良人犹在否？清风夜夜琵琶。声声呼唤付流沙，大江何渺渺，代代唱蒹葭。欣赏学习。问候老师。

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Posted: 2010-03-17 08:38:20 Post subject:

谢谢赏阅,问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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