笑聊
探花
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 Posted: 2010-03-13 06:59:52 Post subject: 卜算子-海棠临屏和白云兄《带雨海棠》 |
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出浴贵天仙，艳丽春风俏。沾水红颜透莹晶，恰似杨妃娇。
醉舞戏长空，无语轻轻袅。柔骨依依惹爱怜，直把君心挠。 |
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 17:07:35 Post subject: |
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笑和一首:
贵妃出浴娆,
帶雨海棠娇.
窈窕胭脂俏,
与君乐逍遥!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-03-14 04:51:03 Post subject: |
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谢白云兄唱和，笑接一首：
与君乐逍遥，三顾魂已消。
窃窃私下语，无奈看明朝。 |
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影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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| Posted: 2010-03-14 05:44:49 Post subject: |
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直把君心挠
海棠妖娆
欣赏学习
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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SLIU
秀才
Joined: 01 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2010-03-14 05:58:31 Post subject: |
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| 带雨海棠，出浴天仙。。。欣赏好词。 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-03-14 06:14:26 Post subject: |
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[quote="影沉寒水"]直把君心挠
海棠妖娆
欣赏学习[/quote]
问好！感谢影沉寒水兄 点评卜算子-海棠！ |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-03-14 06:16:16 Post subject: |
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[quote="sliu6"]带雨海棠，出浴天仙。。。欣赏好词。[/quote]
谢谢sliu6雅读、点评卜算子-海棠！ |
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