白云闲人
探花
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* 帶 雨 海 棠 *
<调寄巫山一段云>
帶雨胭脂俏 ,
华清出浴芳 .
丽人朝鏡比红妆 ,
娓声问情郎 .
听道海棠窈窕 ,
頓发娇瞋泣调 .
請君今夜伴花眠,
碎花掷郎前 .
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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君山楚女
秀才
Joined: 09 Sep 2008
Posts: 333
Location: 湖南雁城［居住南京］
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| Posted: 2010-03-12 16:09:56 Post subject: |
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描写细腻，情状真切，词风婉丽，果然妙手。
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影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 05:31:46 Post subject: |
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听道海棠窈窕，帶雨胭脂俏
读完似见真人婷婷玉立
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 06:16:04 Post subject: |
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读白云兄《带雨海棠》词，真的是一种享受。临屏和上一首《卜算子-海棠》助兴：
出浴贵天仙，艳丽春风俏。沾水红颜透莹晶，恰似杨妃娇。
醉舞戏长空，无语轻轻袅。柔骨依依惹爱怜，直把君心挠。 |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 08:04:14 Post subject: |
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| 带雨海棠太俏，丽人醋劲太强，情郎回语太直。。。 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 17:46:49 Post subject: |
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謝君山兄雅評与鼓励!
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诗中岁月,
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 17:48:54 Post subject: |
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謝影沉寒水欣赏与形象之点评!
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 17:51:15 Post subject: |
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謝謝笑聊兄的婉雅和词!
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诗中岁月,
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 17:53:04 Post subject: |
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庆宏说的三"太",妙极! 謝謝!
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诗中岁月,
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