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[原创]昨夜 一场雨淅沥下过不停
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PostPosted: 2007-03-03 17:12:42    Post subject: [原创]昨夜 一场雨淅沥下过不停 Reply with quote

昨夜 一场雨淅沥下过不停



田 斌



昨夜 一场雨淅沥下过不停

铺天盖地 还有呼啸的风

刮过不停

像是在梦中 父亲



昨夜 你在我梦中 父亲

雨淅沥下过不停 纷纷扬扬

像梨花飘落那么白 一朵两朵

又似咸涩的泪 一串一串

父亲 你手牵耕牛 肩扛耕犁

身穿蓑衣 把春田播种

是梦 又是我在追忆 父亲



暮色里 沿着阡陌的小径

你走在袅绕的炊烟里

煤油灯光 照着你汗流浃背的躯体

柴草烧澡的锅里 你洗去一天的疲劳

这是你给我一辈子的印象 父亲



这是梦 又是现实

是我一辈子的牵挂与思念 父亲









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PostPosted: 2007-03-04 05:48:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

雨中寄情,真挚、感人。提读。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-04 13:23:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的材料
还需要提炼
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