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单程车票

四一果
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Joined: 13 Mar 2010
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四一果Collection

Posted: 2010-03-23 20:58:00 Post subject: 单程车票

单程车票我还在为你春暖花开的日子献上一把土花酌之后浇上最后一滴水芬芳张开稚气的翅膀我扬起手臂收不住时间滴打在瓦上的声音我只有单程车票越来越近的市声巧妙地分散迢迢的野草和闲花你用一根一根的头发盖过新翻的泥土的气息盖不住青一色的预谋看一条小河奔跑在我们后面照着背影解咒的符于你远远不够在路上我们无法防止一场追尾的事故同样无法说出在满天星斗下一块已经熟睡的石头三朵白云终究要亮出鹰亮出来清澈的眼神证明那只鹰代表我的偏爱和夙愿我唯恐听不到它返回草原的声音日夜增加一个日子的高度

子花
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Joined: 08 Mar 2007
Posts: 722

子花Collection

Posted: 2010-03-23 21:20:19 Post subject:

拖延时间滴打在瓦上的声音我只有单程车票 ----不太好，浅见！

四一果
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Joined: 13 Mar 2010
Posts: 43

四一果Collection

Posted: 2010-03-23 21:55:31 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

拖延时间滴打在瓦上的声音
我只有单程车票
----不太好，浅见！

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