影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-08 09:07:44 Post subject: 七律。奈何误入相思地 |
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七律。奈何误入相思地
斗室如存自在心,却随满月荡天云
学来黄酒千杯手,醉去红梅一梦春
晨就诗词格韵老,香飞墨纸印痕新
奈何误入相思地,半缕情丝悟到今 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-08 13:40:48 Post subject: |
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自在出入相思地,洒脱情丝看古今!
拿得起,放得下.保重! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 918 Location: 四川省德阳市 米运刚Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-09 04:54:47 Post subject: |
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欣赏影沉寒水诗歌,更同意白云闲人观点。相思地,美妙境地,自由自在出入,自由自在享受!问好二位兄台! |
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影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-09 04:54:49 Post subject: |
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谢谢斑斑鼓励 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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