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（贴一个小的交流）一朵花寂寞地开着

吴景慧
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Posted: 2010-03-06 01:35:17 Post subject: （贴一个小的交流）一朵花寂寞地开着

一朵花寂寞地开着等待把一朵花植入情怀。然后象一只蜂,唱着、舞着在花丛中驰骋是花儿不解蜂的心事还是蜂儿不懂花的心情在春的深处一朵寂寞的花让我怎也打不开 ——相思的话题 _________________ 诗是分行的文字，但不是所有分行的文字都是诗。写完了一首诗之后，自己再读一读，看看能不能先感动了你自己。http://blog.sina.com.cn/dongfanghui123

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Posted: 2010-03-06 12:52:19 Post subject:

朝夕相处，何来相思不好意思，开了了个玩笑挺灵动的小诗

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Posted: 2010-03-06 18:08:31 Post subject:

灵动小诗，令人回味。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2010-03-07 04:53:25 Post subject:

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Posted: 2010-03-07 08:18:03 Post subject:

让我怎也打不开 ——相思的话题 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

吴景慧
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Posted: 2010-03-22 21:55:56 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

让我怎也打不开

——相思的话题

谢谢阿依琼裙的关注！
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Posted: 2010-03-22 22:07:07 Post subject:

你去接受吧。接受爱，接受被爱。只有接受，没有放下。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-03-22 22:53:16 Post subject:

泡妞未遂

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Posted: 2010-03-22 23:57:23 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

泡妞未遂

哈哈哈！还有这样理解诗的。高！
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Posted: 2010-03-23 00:26:14 Post subject:

等待把一朵花植入情怀。然后象一只蜂,唱着、舞着在花丛中驰骋语言简练，思路清晰！问好！

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