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《在流浪里爱，在爱里流浪》（组诗）/边井

边井
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Posted: 2010-03-01 23:00:50 Post subject: 《在流浪里爱，在爱里流浪》（组诗）/边井

《在流浪里爱，在爱里流浪》（组诗）/边井《在流浪里爱，在爱里流浪》我能听见雨水成偶数状地滴落在过去的世界里那里没有光和呼吸没有后悔我能看见你哭泣的声音泪水一个一个地流我在黑夜里等待胡子从黑变白这雪亮的胡子一定能照亮临死前一声嘹亮地吼———— 《年方二八》如果我也是一朵花也许要六十年才开花二八的我在城市之间寻找奔波间隙里家的气息不是不需要爱情停下脚步的时候一朵花映入眼帘一朵花开在别人的春天一朵花开在眼前我的心留下一道离别的疤《在哪里》虫鸣夜的布包不住花香走的路留不住美梦醒的人抓不住未来我的人猜不住《以南》北京以北四合院以外雪盖住了黑嘿的土冰冷的大街脚滑那个赶一辆马车追梦的男孩在孤独中长出胡子在现实中刮掉胡子在梦境中接收雨水女孩在梦境中送来雨水那个在屋檐下听雨的泥泞的村道热烈雨冲开了泥泞的土微弱的灯光下南京 2010.3.2 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1315714392 http://122158706.qzone.qq.com/

骨笛
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Joined: 03 Jan 2009
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Posted: 2010-03-02 01:21:37 Post subject:

听见哭泣的声音 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

杨海军
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Posted: 2010-03-02 16:45:51 Post subject:

提一下。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

安红红
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Posted: 2010-03-04 03:56:52 Post subject:

美梦醒的人抓不住愚见~改一个字试试~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

边井
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Joined: 26 Oct 2009
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Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2010-03-16 22:40:40 Post subject:

谢大家提！谢安红红诗友指点，已改。。。 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1315714392 http://122158706.qzone.qq.com/

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