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翅吻(外3首)
吟啸徐行
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PostPosted: 2010-03-01 20:14:15    Post subject: 翅吻(外3首) Reply with quote

《翅吻》

我的目光抬出波涛
落回岸边金色的沙滩
你好看的羽翎
正飞过祖国的大海

一种绿,祖母绿
一种蓝,母亲蓝
一种白,女儿白

你的翅,俯下
吻过,我心的海平线

《我只被风吹》

我没有被雨打的理由
我所做的事都与雨打无关
即使有雨泼下
一伞在手
我可以随时遮掩

倘若雨突然偷袭
我可以钻到别人檐下
我比过去更在乎自己的尊严

我曾被风吹也被雨打
现在我只被风吹
吹得我一阵阵发干

《姑奶》

孩提时,就听你说
你是一只脚踏进棺材的人
后来,我离村庄越来越远
离你那句话越来越远

越来越远中
村中许多年长的,同年的,年幼的
先后走进了棺材
而你仍一只脚踏在棺材里
一只脚踏在棺材外

你的腰,揉弯
我沾满灰土的疑问
你的头发,刷白
我漂泊多年的吃惊

《我爱一只秋天的苹果》

一只秋天的苹果
被我亲一口
就有亲一口的疼痛
可苹果坚持着,直到被我亲完

苹果心里藏着种子
下辈子还做我爱的苹果
不像有些人,遭遇一点疼痛
就牢骚满腹

而一只秋天的苹果
不管几生几世,它对人的态度
始终保持甜美和圆满
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-02 04:52:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

又是一组好诗

推赏并学习
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2010-03-02 16:44:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

同意楼上意见。诗不但要有激情,也要有技巧,就是说不但你的房子贵,你的装修也要好,这样才有品味吧。
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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