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书究竟是什么?
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PostPosted: 2010-03-16 20:53:51    Post subject: 书究竟是什么? Reply with quote

书究竟是什么?

一本崭新的书
品出了李白酿的
千年陈酒
看到了蒙娜丽莎
永恒的微笑
小小的一方天地
大到上至天文下至地理
小到鸡毛蒜皮
尽收其中

薄薄纸上的东西
有时被尖锐的问题
一捅就破
有时千年的陈书
把今天的问题说得
明明白白
有的今天的书
对今天的事情
却说不清楚

今天的天
依旧是按牛顿的引力
按部就班地运行
可昨天的事
肯定不同于今天的事
有时道理很简单
一生二二生三三生万物
却又无法破解

很多时候
书是一盘甜点有滋有味
又像是空气
无法摆脱又飘忽不定
更觉得是一把利剑
弄不好也会伤了自己
尽信书宁无书!


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PostPosted: 2010-03-16 21:02:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

若只是说道理或者描写都不错,这首诗中说的道理就那么几个,说得清清楚楚的,这样联系着道理外的文字读读下来,显得道理之外的东西有点赘。问好!!!!!
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