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我看到你躲藏的目光

戴永良
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Posted: 2010-02-24 06:32:34 Post subject: 我看到你躲藏的目光

我看到你躲藏的目光游弋于草木摇晃和玉鸟飞翔的地方是嘈杂的声音分散了情绪让凝聚的炽热披上了寒霜是簇拥的目光融化了深情的锋芒让敞开的心胸筑起了高墙是贪婪的诱惑孵化了纯真的思想让你浮躁的心萌生了新的渴望还是我沉默的表述又让你无法触摸心的滚烫你的微笑象楔子楔在了我的心上我每天抚摸、拥抱如怀宝藏融于血液徐徐流淌、温如琼浆如今我看到你躲闪的目光追随着鸟的翅膀挣脱我的视野飞翔眼前的真切已经渐渐冰凉 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

安红红
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Posted: 2010-02-25 00:20:02 Post subject:

象长了梦的鸟语的翅膀以离开我的视野飞翔这两句有些磕磕碰碰的~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

戴永良
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Posted: 2010-03-05 08:46:48 Post subject:

确实如此。已改。 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

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