非马
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-06-22
tièzǐ: 907
láizì: 芝加哥
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 fābiǎoyú: 2009-12-07 10:39:08 fābiǎozhùtí: SEA O SEA |
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SEA O SEA
-- slaughtering pilot whales in the Faroe Islands, Denmark
calm after carnage
the bloody sea
finally ceases boiling
soon the night curtain will fall
to conceal the savage scene
letting the glaring red fade
into the deep dark corner
of unhumankind's memory
*The following Website contains related photos:
http://teadream.wordpress.com/2008/12/05/demark/
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Lake
举人
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-09
tièzǐ: 1286
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| fābiǎoyú: 2009-12-07 23:08:29 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Shocking, very powerful imagery. I wouldn't want to be at the scene. I guess it must be a heated issue. Concise and compact as always.
Enjoyed.
Lake
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William Zhou周道模
探花
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10
tièzǐ: 3950
láizì: 中国四川广汉
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| fābiǎoyú: 2010-02-08 20:14:43 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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尽管我们能读懂，我还是想介绍给不懂英语的更多的读者。试译如下，请非马老师审校。
大海啊大海
——丹麦法罗岛上的屠杀领航鲸事件
非马 诗 周道模 译
屠戮之后的平静
血染的海啊
最终停止了沸腾
不久夜幕会降下
遮掩这残酷的场景
使这灼目的血红
淡入非人类记忆的
幽深的角落
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非马
秀才
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-06-22
tièzǐ: 907
láizì: 芝加哥
非马běiměifēngwénjí |
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William Zhou周道模
探花
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10
tièzǐ: 3950
láizì: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2010-02-08 23:41:25 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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不久夜的幕帘就会降下--不久夜幕将会降下
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我原来想“夜幕”和“夜暮”有点混淆。好，改过来。谢非马老师！
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冷巉
举人
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-03-10
tièzǐ: 1106
láizì: 中国十堰
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| fābiǎoyú: 2010-02-17 19:46:24 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Shocking, very powerful imagery. I wouldn't want to be at the scene. I guess it must be a heated issue. Concise and compact as always.
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同感。问好。
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冷巉 湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000 |
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冷巉
举人
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-03-10
tièzǐ: 1106
láizì: 中国十堰
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| fābiǎoyú: 2010-02-17 19:47:44 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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问好非马老师，感谢周道模先生的译作，让我读懂了这篇诗作。
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冷巉 湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000 |
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