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步寒江雪影先生杂感五

月映春江
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Posted: 2010-02-08 00:49:43 Post subject: 步寒江雪影先生杂感五

步寒江雪影先生杂感五人老心难老，慵看两鬓斑。遐思浮碧汉，俗体锁人寰。岁月蹉跎恨，骚坛奋勇攀。蹒跚平仄路，敲韵洗愁颜。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-02-08 00:59:27 Post subject:

欢迎您,心态不老,骚坛勇攀的新朋友! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-02-08 05:54:02 Post subject:

【057】月映春江步寒江雪影先生杂感五人老心难老，慵看两鬓斑。遐思浮碧汉，俗体锁人寰。岁月蹉跎恨，骚坛奋勇攀。蹒跚平仄路，敲韵洗愁颜。月映春江，来自上海。学习，欣赏，问好！

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-02-08 05:55:34 Post subject:

【055】繁芽【056】天涯醉客（美国）【057】月映春江（上海）

月映春江
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Posted: 2010-02-08 07:27:52 Post subject:

谢李先生鼓励！您是高手，还请不吝赐教！

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-02-08 08:14:13 Post subject:

月映春江 wrote:

谢李先生鼓励！您是高手，还请不吝赐教！

问好！我只是个普通诗歌爱好者。历年来收集雅俗共赏的诗词曲，供自己学习欣赏，仅得60余家，来到这里较短时间就收集了20多位师友的佳作，感觉收获颇丰。

寒江雪影
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Posted: 2010-02-08 08:40:54 Post subject:

感谢月映春江先生的赐和，只恐浊了您清誉耳。"蹒跚平仄路，敲韵洗愁颜。"平仄路语涉双关，甚妙，既指诗词创作亦指人生路途，有平坦也有狭窄崎岖，若非崎岖，那有愁颜用洗? 李盈枝先生是大家，诗词知识广泛，因我近日退休有空，故常来向他讨教，希望先生不是吝啬文人吧，提携提携可乎? _________________ "課虛無以責有, 叩寂寞而求音。"

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-02-08 09:41:40 Post subject:

心难老,奋勇攀. 好心境! 蹣跚平仄路,敲韵洗愁颜. 诚請月映春江友多來枫园暢詠,一起活跃身心,丰盛人生! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-02-08 11:32:08 Post subject:

欢迎月映春江诗友！ http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=27943

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-08 19:44:00 Post subject:

问好！蹒跚平仄路，敲韵洗愁颜。佳句，学习了。

月映春江
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Posted: 2010-02-08 20:48:29 Post subject: 答谢各位吟友的鼓励

承蒙各位吟友之厚爱，谢谢！

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