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让风吹进来

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-26 22:24:23 Post subject: 让风吹进来

让风吹进来明晃晃的浴灯热水从头淋下雾气弥漫你渐渐隐匿镜中水汽里，你放松自己想很久以前的那场大雾也像现在看不清镜中的自己白茫茫的一片熟知的、不相识的皆隐约水汽漫上眼眶看不清路中的石头和陷阱也找不到逃遁的出口你只能学蜗牛，匍匐前行而你始终相信善良相信祖辈的箴言只要路一直踩在脚下只要时间和距离足够久远当风悄悄吹来大雾之后，迎接你的必是一轮艳阳就像头顶这盏温暖的浴灯在灯下，在雾中我一次次的净化着自己打开一扇炽热的门让风吹进来让雾气消散 2007-1-26

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-01-26 23:28:07 Post subject:

这首写得极为纯净喜欢 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-26 23:52:11 Post subject:

还请多批,感觉还是浅了,写不出有深度的~ 问好大斑

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-01-27 02:47:43 Post subject:

挺好的诗，祝贺。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-27 03:26:13 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

挺好的诗，祝贺。

问好冲浪兄,还请多批才对,别尽说好听的哦~ Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2007-01-27 17:37:45 Post subject:

冲浪能说好可不容易. 的确不错, 建议加精.

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Posted: 2007-01-28 04:21:10 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

冲浪能说好可不容易. 的确不错, 建议加精.

月光MM,千万别乱说话,我这个加了精,恐怕大家的每一首都该加精了,嘿嘿，咱还知道自己的水平,不上你的当 Very Happy

kokho
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Posted: 2007-03-05 11:39:22 Post subject:

拜读　问好　；）。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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