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七言——应竹叶飞刀诗兄之约而作

君山楚女
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Posted: 2010-01-18 15:52:24 Post subject: 七言——应竹叶飞刀诗兄之约而作

竹影招摇弄月窗，叶声娇艳抖风霜；飞霞流韵视屏灿，刀豆开花花更香。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-01-18 21:05:52 Post subject:

问好君山兄！叶声娇艳抖风霜——此句不通。一、声音不会娇艳；二，娇艳与竹不搭边。

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