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★浣溪沙•听雨轩主咏怀(戏网友一组)
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 00:08:02    Post subject: ★浣溪沙•听雨轩主咏怀(戏网友一组) Reply with quote

浣溪沙·听雨轩主咏怀(新韵)

形自从容气自闲,
推窗摘月挂天南。
心能达悟便超然。

文胆与吾充酒胆,
青锋剑作钓鱼竿。
但凭朱笔点江山。

——于枕上读《红袖诗风》集听雨大版主李金生先生诗句
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 00:09:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

浣溪沙·走马观花自述(新韵)

快意人生扬马蹄,(奔驰列车)
苍梧终有凤凰栖。(罗 贤 生)
惟愁世上鹊声稀。(林间流水)

骨瘦肩能扛汉鼎,(听雨轩主)
悠闲气度悟天机。(清风白莲)
泡妞拐走万人迷。(走马观花)

——于枕上读《红袖诗风》所得,为辽宁省发改委董振宇处长树碑立传。
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 00:28:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

浣溪沙·美人剑醉歌(新韵)

月到中秋又一轮,
蟾宫捣药总纷纷。
丝丝秀发羡佳人。

事每推敲成妙趣,
春风拂拭焕如新。
高天滚滚任行吟。

——于躺椅上读《红袖诗风》所得,集湖北省麻城市残联办公室主任鲍海涛大官人诗句。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 00:34:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

浣溪沙·走马观花顿悟歌(新韵)

已约佳期偏踏空,
眉山眸水共生情。
风光偏向美人生。

人欲真如河畔草,
罢官阴影至今仍。
键盘敲出木鱼声。

——于躺椅上读《红袖诗风》所得,再集董处长走马观花时所吟诗句。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 00:38:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

浣溪沙·陕西丫头可人儿(新韵)

泼墨疏狂理旧衷,(岸芷汀兰)
恰凭朝气驭春风。(美 人 剑)
还因拎桶小腰倾。(走马观花)

染颊红云初着色,(听雨轩主)
愁牵寂寞一情浓,(半阙清蟾)
犹将世界揽怀中。(清风白莲)

——白日史无前例地睡了四小时后所得。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 00:43:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

浣溪沙·倒驾红尘驾天地(新韵)

立世从容观大千,(林间流水)
披琼佩剑束岌冠。(半阙清蟾)
挺如春笋直如鞭。(走马观花)

驾驭三山如骏马,(美 人 剑)
天空海阔逞雄谈。(听雨轩主)
轻衔夜色过群峦。(奔驰列车)

——被陕西人合伙欺负,关机后读《红袖诗风》所得。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 00:55:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

初看校长言吓了一跳,我填此牌确未对照词谱,觉得既是律句只要不出律就行了,我以为自己弄错了,急忙找来<<唐宋词格律>>翻看,阿弥陀佛,幸哉!看来自信也有成功的时候,小小骄傲一下.
另我一直有个疑惑,就是这个浣溪沙的沙字究竟是沙还是纱呢?各种版本和诗友都各有所用,而我个人总觉得应该是纱

浣溪沙·答可人儿(步李煜韵)

一个沙字难悟透,
蜗牛顿似笼中兽。
缩在壳中眉紧皱。

该牌顺口如波溜,
我作鲜花贴鼻嗅。
现把详情来禀奏。

一、《辞海》1074页

浣溪沙 唐教坊曲名,后用为词牌。一作《浣纱溪》,又名《小庭花》。双调四十二字,平韵。南唐李煜有仄韵之作。

现把详情来禀奏。
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原来欺负老实人居然有这么多好处啊,不但得了两首词还解了一道惑,这回可赚大发了,下次要再接再厉的欺负,窃笑...

还没禀奏完。因为蜗牛还在琢磨,李煜他老爸怎么成了填这个“唐教坊曲”的第一人呢?不但在《全唐诗》里他的这个“沙”第一个出现,而且内容也是写的“本意”呢?莫非李煜他老爸曾是杨贵妃时代的宫廷乐师?
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 03:08:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

明月姣浩东入窗,骚人寂寞转情肠。
青烟袅袅随风动,寒鸟幽幽绕树翔。
独上高楼空望远,且凭玉瑟寄思长。
仰天舒愤悲难禁,一曲未成弦满霜。

浣溪沙·咏史

明月姣浩东入窗,
骚人寂寞转情肠。
且凭玉瑟寄思长。

独上高楼空望远,
红尘倒驾暂无方。
秦兵伐汉捣咸阳。

——临屏读倒驾红尘七律所得

哈哈,严重抗议,以我之矛攻我之盾,看来咸阳危矣。奈何。

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-发布日期: 2009-4-25
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PostPosted: 2010-01-09 03:10:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

浣溪沙·咏商代蜗牛国村委会警卫员李盈枝(新韵)

本色常于百姓齐,
陶公采菊只东篱。
鞠躬何惜瘦枝低。

馥郁家乡为己任,
平平仄仄韵相依。
要同秋实比丰仪。

——美人剑自改七律为词咏怀古代贤达所得。
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