非马
秀才
註册時間: 2006-06-22
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來自: 芝加哥
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 發錶於: 2009-11-01 21:24:01 發錶主題: 诗挑战 POETRY CHALLENGE |
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美国诗友维尔妲·莫雷思(Wilda Morris)是前任伊利诺州诗人协会会长,在芝加哥的诗坛上相当活跃。最近她开辟了一个叫《诗挑战》的英文网页http://wildamorris.blogspot.com/
每月初由她出题邀读者竞写,在月半前收齐后,由她及她邀请的诗人从中挑选出一两首优异的作品张贴,供人欣赏。十一月的诗题是“时装附件”（帽子、手提包、领带、皮带、皮鞋、围巾、首饰等等）,用了我的Necktie(领带)作为引诗:
NECKTIE
Before the mirror
he carefully makes himself
a tight knot
to let the hairy hand
of civilization
drag him
on
下面是这首诗的中文版:
<领带>
在镜前
精心为自己
打一个
牢牢的圈套
乖乖
让文明多毛的手
牵著脖子走
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Lake
举人
註册時間: 2007-01-09
帖子: 1286
Lake北美楓文集 |
| 發錶於: 2009-11-02 11:05:37 發錶主題: |
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This is very characteristic of you, Mr Fei Ma, that you write abut something ordinary into something extraordinary. I would suggest you submit some of your poems to American Life in Poetry, a project by Ted Kooser.
Best,
Lake
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非马
秀才
註册時間: 2006-06-22
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來自: 芝加哥
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| 發錶於: 2009-11-02 14:06:47 發錶主題: |
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| Lake 寫到: |
This is very characteristic of you, Mr Fei Ma, that you write abut something ordinary into something extraordinary. I would suggest you submit some of your poems to American Life in Poetry, a project by Ted Kooser.
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Thanks, Lake! Talking about Ted Kooser, I recently received a translation award from 《诗潮》（沈阳）with my translation of some of his poems.
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SLIU
秀才
註册時間: 2010-01-01
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SLIU北美楓文集 |
| 發錶於: 2010-01-03 07:18:16 發錶主題: |
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| IMPRESSIVE!! THANKS FOR SHARING. |
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William Zhou周道模
探花
註册時間: 2007-06-10
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來自: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模北美楓文集 |
| 發錶於: 2010-02-06 20:30:33 發錶主題: |
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最近一年写了许多三行微型诗，想学先生的“构思奇特、立意深远、写小成大、语凡味浓”等优点，当然不是盲目模仿，而是自出新裁。我挂两首求教。
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