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古联巧对
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 07:28:48    Post subject: 古联巧对 Reply with quote
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寂寞寒窗空守寡；
惆怅忧怀怕忆情。

寂寞寒窗空守寡
退避迷途返逍遥

寂寞寒窗空守寡
沙漠泪海渐涨潮

寂寞寒窗空守寡
伶仃佛侧倦作僧

寂寞寒窗空守寡
江海汹涌泛波涛


寂寞寒窗空守寡
梧桐朽枕枉相棲

寂寞寒窗空守寡
淡泊江湖溯源游

寄寓客家，寂寞寒窗空守寡。
倘修仙佛，休偕佳偶但依僧。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 07:38:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
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从这些巧对可以看出古人的聪明才智。

寄寓客家，寂寞寒窗空守寡。（仄仄仄平，仄仄平平平仄仄）
倘修仙佛，休偕佳偶但依僧。（仄平平仄，平平平仄仄平平）

巧对一般可以放宽格律，但这副对联依然恪守联律，山下联的偏旁井然有序，也富有古代的情趣。真是不错。唯“休偕”对“寂寞”欠工。

谢谢转贴，并问好！

另，因为是古联，故必须依照那时的读音标注平仄。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 08:00:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
李盈枝 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
（出句对句皆佚名）
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从这些巧对可以看出古人的聪明才智。
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谢谢李兄评注！“休偕”对“寂寞”的确欠工。问候李兄圣诞快乐新年好！
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 19:13:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
出句：寂寞寒窗空守寡（佚名）
对句：安宁宝宇实宜家（罗子）
横批：宽容
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 22:28:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
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出句：寂寞寒窗空守寡（佚名）
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对得有意思。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 22:59:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
发表于 2009-12-27 09:54 资料 个人空间 短消息
qinghongh 写到 wrote:
（出句对句皆佚名）
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从这些巧对可以看出古人的聪明才智。

寄寓客家，寂寞寒窗空守寡。（仄仄仄平，仄仄平平平仄仄）
室宽容寝，安宁宝宇实宜家。（仄平平仄，平平仄仄仄平平）

巧对一般可以放宽格律，但这副对联依然恪守联律，山下联的偏旁井然有序，也富有古代的情趣。真是不错。

谢谢转贴，并问好！

另，因为是古联，故必须依照那时的读音标注平仄。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 23:06:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
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