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听,雪落的声音
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 05:29:29    Post subject: 听,雪落的声音 Reply with quote

听,雪落的声音

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幻想过一万次雪落的模样,也没有用双眼看着那么清晰。今天,有雪,暮色重重的心情,突然滋生出些许美丽。靠窗而坐,欣赏细碎的雪花在空中飞舞。



江南的雪,一如小家碧玉的婉约,羞羞怯怯地,似犹抱琵琶半遮面的美女,姗姗舞动着细碎的步子。瞧,雪花中夹带着细雨的晶莹。江南的雪总是这样,是个娇小姐,绝不肯轻易出门。就算要去,也得拉上一个两个的小姐妹做伴。江南的雪,注定了是神奇而娇贵的精灵。



隐隐约约,楼下的枇杷树,有几张叶子悄悄地盛了一些白雪的影子,变得通润而骄傲。树叶儿就那么傲气地挺立着,彷佛在告诉别人,它喜欢雪花的轻盈。而那些未开的花骨朵,则无声无息地聚集在一起,一点也不张扬。



推开窗子,我用双手迎向雪花。那些细细碎碎的精灵哦,轻盈地躲避着、跳跃着、纷飞着。风不急,徐徐而来,让我感觉有彻骨的寒冷。但我实在太爱这雪花了,这难得一见的雪占据了我整个空虚的心。我索性把毛衣袖管挽起来,让我的皮肤尽情地与雪花亲吻。哦,我感觉到了,一片、两片......很多片美丽的雪花,停落在我的手臂、手掌、手心。那雪竟然没有一丝寒意,相反,却还有一缕温润细腻的感觉。



或许,雪真的是荡涤污浊的东西,充满了纯洁的灵异之气。当一片一片的雪花飘落下来,融化进你的温度里,心,便在那一刻变得异常纯净。细雨夹带着雪花,曼妙地在天地间舞动,我在邀请一种直达心灵深处的感觉,洗涤我禁锢了三个季节的凡心。让我的心随着雪花飘飞,起舞;让我的痛随着白雪融化,消失。



雪花、细雨、树叶、花蕾,还有靠在窗口的赏雪人,此刻,是否已经成了一幅严冬的风景?靠在窗前,一任天地之间雪花曼舞,我似乎听到了一种天籁之音!在树叶的缝隙间、在高楼的屋宇、在宽畅的道路、在寂静的原野......那样优美,又是那样的空灵。你听,你听,雪落的声音!
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诗情画意的江南,养育了一个爱诗歌的女人。于是,在几度夕阳里,我亦歌亦吟,在江南阡陌上,姗姗而来......
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 16:16:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

l楼主以炽烈的文笔赋予雪的生命,是那样鲜活,那样灵动,那样俊俏,那样诱人!

让我的心也随着雪花飘飞,起舞;也让我的痛也随着白雪融化,消失......

拜读!

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